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Fix short, choppy sentences by answering the 5 W’s and H (
Who? What? Where? When? Why? How?)
Sentence: She plays with her friends.
Who
?
Mary
plays with her friends.
What
? Mary’s plays
basketball
with her friends.
Where
? Mary plays basketball with her friends
at the school gym
.
When
?
Every Saturday afternoon
, Mary plays basketball with her friends at the school gym.
Why
? Every Saturday afternoon, Mary plays basketball with her friends at the school gym
for exercise and fun
.
How
? Every Saturday afternoon, Mary plays basketball
enthusiastically
with her friends at the school gym for exercise and fun.
**Be careful not to overdo it. A variety of sentence length is important too.
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Sentence: She plays with her friends.
Who? Mary plays with her friends.
What? Mary’s plays basketball with her friends.
Where? Mary plays basketball with her friends at the school gym.
When? Every Saturday afternoon, Mary plays basketball with her friends at the school gym.
Why? Every Saturday afternoon, Mary plays basketball with her friends at the school gym for exercise and fun.
How? Every Saturday afternoon, Mary plays basketball enthusiastically with her friends at the school gym for exercise and fun.
**Be careful not to overdo it. A variety of sentence length is important too.